Comment on a Space story
dear Rhiannon,
I really like your story,
it just seems to describe the humdrum of schoolday life so well,because the day you chose to describe was not a good day,not a bad day,just a day.It’s those days that make up the majority of the days in our lives.You also have a very distinctive voice in you’re writing,a voice that says things like you think them.I really like the first part,because all of us have those thoughts in our head first thing in the morning.I also like the way you describe lunch because it’s so true’fifteen chairs around a table that’s supposed to have eight”.You did an exellent job of capturing that day.